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Forum Name:	Painting Critiques
Topic ID:	11032
Message ID:	3
#3, RE: lions fill me with pride and mi Posted by kram on Jan-18-09 at 00:36 AM In response to message #0 Love the colors, would love to see this one in person I think you got overdescriptive on the poem, but the concept is nice. If you could shorten it, that is, say more with less words, I think it would flow much smoother and really compliment the painting. Very cool!